"Look" everyone scream once we saw the fluttring flames of the olmpic flame.
It was the opening of the Rio 2016 olympics. We where at the olympic stadium watching the astounding opning ceromony. They had just litten the towering torch. The torch was artificial trees in a huge bowl with flames floating like fire flies.
This made me feel amazing, it felt lke i was floating with the fire. The fire started to roar and suddenely the fire burst up into one big flame and the whole of Rio lit up with BE THE INSPRATION.
This picture gives be inspiration.
Hello Rose,
ReplyDeleteWhat a topical setting for your story! With the Rio Olympics almost on us, the thought of the fluttering flames of the Olympic Torch in a bowl of artificial trees is very creative. Well done.
Your story easily achieves answers to the questions posed with the prompt photo as we find where the scene was, how and why you're there, and whether there is danger or a place of fun. Again, well done.
Looking at spelling and punctuation, I can see you have tried to take care. I only noticed a few small errors you must have missed when editing your interesting story.
I hope you can continue entering the 100WC and sharing your adventures.
Ross Mannell (Team 100WC)
Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia