Thursday, June 30, 2016

Rose 100wc

Word Challenge Week#24



I'm so claustrophobic, Dirt surrounded me and fart smelling smells also. They make me sleep on a hard as rocks bed, I still don't know why I am in here. As I stumble down the misty, slug covered hallway. Everyone can recall my story, the murder who shot a thousand people in a movie theater on Christmas Day. I try to tell them that i didn't do it but the menacing looking guards shove me into a wall and give me a hiding. I yell and scream, it is incredibly hard being the only female in this disgusting revoltive ALKATRAZ.

By Rose abbott

Friday, June 24, 2016

Wednesday, June 15, 2016

Rain drops

                                                  Rain drops                                                                           like dew from a spider web                                                                 like foot steps on leaves                                                                              like Eel skin                                                                                        like wet mud                                                                                     like rotten fish                                                                                     Rain drops                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       


popcorn

Popcorn


popcorn sounds like popping candy in my mouth
popcorn feels crunchy and bumpy
popcorn  smells sweet 
popcorn tastes salty and buttery



Tiger


The jungle is a stealth tiger .On the tiger he has hot red flaming strips.The tiger eyes are like hot red chills.The tiger hunts through the misty night.As his viscous teeth crunch through the bloody MooseThe tiger creeps as fast as the swift wind.









I like this poem because its about your dog loving you .


























































The tiger hunts through the misty night.
As his viscous teeth crunch through the bloody Moose
The tiger creeps as fast as the swift wind.









































































Nicholas' poem

it was a beautiful Monday morning as the trees were straight and strong and as . I  pass
by, the bridges were chatting to each other.


By Nicholas

Popcorn



                                                                   Popcorn

                     Popcorn looks like white fluffy clouds and smoke coming from a rocket.
                                           Popcorn sounds like crunchy popping candy.
                                                     Popcorn fells like sticky honey.
                                                       Popcorn smells like honey.
                                              Popcorn taste like sweet sugary syrup.




I like this poem because its about best friends. 

Tyra-Leigh's Haiku

basketball is cool
the team was shooting the ball
we are the best team
I like this  poems because it is about  winter and it is interesting.

ANDREA'S POEM

I'm watching the river
so strong and long
so much sediment, bacteria and nutrients too
not so blue I don't have a clue
not so clear but you can hear
I'll stay up late to watch natures fate
shine and shimmer
knowing what in the river may give you a shiver





 I like this poem because it reminds me about my nan.it makes my forgive myself for not helping her when needed.In loving memory of nanny Dora

Jade poem

The day is  a dragon.
The clouded  sun is her dull  yellow eyes
The thunder is her claws scathing the warm air.
Her scales  are the  ripples in the water
Her breath is the lava  sparing when the exploding mountain with melted rocks.
When night jogs in , her eyes become blue and black.
The stars are the smoke  coming  from her nose.





I like this poem because  its about friend ship .

Turtle

The murky water is a dark turtle's shell.
The vines are the colour of its lime green eyes,
The plankton are the victims it devours in the lake,
Its shell is as hard as steel.
Crawling on the beach like a crab out of reach,
It lays its eggs.
Broken shell like a snail that is down,
It moves along the beach.
Written By Matthew




A circle is round
it has no end
thats how long I
 want to be your friend


Unknown Author 

basketball haiku

5 Basketball is cool 

7-Rebounding and shooting hoops 

5-LeBron James is cool

By Troy

The polar bear
roaring and growling
teeth thrashing and ice cracking
white and fluffy feet

I like this poem because one of my favourite animals is a polar bear and the poet used lots of adjectives.

IRON MAN

IRON MAN CAN  FLY. 
IRON MAN CAN SHOOT LASERS.
IRON MAN IS COOL.






i like this poem because is really descriptive.
                                                                                                                                 

A stormy day

A storm is a grey bunny.
The hale is her fluffy tale.
The grey clouds are her prey
Her ears are the lightning strikes that hit the ground.


Elvis' Poem

Super Hero Haiku

5 - Flash is very fast.

7 - Flash is the Super Hero.

5 - Flash is the Fastest.

Poetry Week Poem Rose


The elephant is a grey stormy night
Grey torrential clouds are her thick leather skin
Lightning bolts are her tremendously long trunk
Rain is her dreaded enemy bucketing down
Her sparkling eyes are he fragile stars hiding be hind the monster like clouds
Leather skin as rough as rocks
Thunderous feet are like the hulk booming down on the city

I like this poem because it is descriptive and has interesting words

Poetry week poems!

Haiku Poem called: Colours!

Red,Orange,Blue,Pink

Are all colours in the sky,

Rainbows run the world!

Number One Teacher

Miss Wyllie,
I'm happy that you're my teacher;
I enjoy each lesson you teach.
As my role model you inspire me
To dream and to work and to reach.

With your kindness you get my attention;
Every day you are planting a seed
Of curiosity and motivation
To know and to grow and succeed.

You help me fulfill my potential;
I'm thankful for all that you've done.
I admire you each day, and I just want to say,
As a teacher, you're number one!

By Joanna Fuchs

I like this poem because it says everything my teacher has to offer


Wednesday, June 8, 2016

Waikato River

The mighty Waikato River.
As the river was shimmering and shinning,
Trees waved at the flowing current.
Kayaks bobbing happily.
The pounding current knocking on the rocks.
The eels under the angry river.
I like this poem because it is interesting. 

The River

The stream is flowing through my fingers.                                                                                                       The Fish are telling the current to stop.                                                                                                          Eel's fighting to get back.                                                                                                                             Water dying of heat.                                                                                                                                      Tree's standing tall.    

The River Poem

Water rushing .
Ducks laughing.
The river rushing quick and fast.
The strong bridge watching nature.
Kayaks bobbing happily.

Waikato River Poem Rose

Breathing water walks
Crawling bacteria flowing 
Poking nutrients infecting water
Happy water changing Colour
From Mt Tongariro to Port Waikato
Through twists and turns goes the Mighty Waikato River singing all day long.


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