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hi Elvis from Tyra I love that your poem that it is about flash but I think that you need to work on changing the fist sentence because the last one is like the same as the fist one. good job
Hi Elvis
ReplyDeleteI like your poem but your first and second sentence are nearly the same.Mybe you could chane your starer.
From Oliver
hi Elvis from Tyra
ReplyDeleteI love that your poem that it is about flash but I think that you need to work on changing the fist sentence because the last one is like the same as the fist one. good job