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The mighty Waikato River. As the river was shimmering and shinning, Trees waved at the flowing current. Kayaks bobbing happily. The pounding current knocking on the rocks. The eels under the angry river. I like this poem because it is interesting.
Hi Oliver I like your poem because it describes the River and has personification I think you could work on interesting sentence starter next time From Rose
Wow!This is an amazing poem! I really liked the descriptiveness of this poem! Maybe you could work on more interesting sentence starters?
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p.s Remeber to post a second poem!
Hi Oliver
ReplyDeleteI like your poem because it describes the River and has personification
I think you could work on interesting sentence starter next time
From Rose