I'm watching the river
so strong and long
so much sediment, bacteria and nutrients too
not so blue I don't have a clue
not so clear but you can hear
I'll stay up late to watch natures fate
shine and shimmer
knowing what in the river may give you a shiver
I like this poem because it reminds me about my nan.it makes my forgive myself for not helping her when needed.In loving memory of nanny Dora
I really like your poem that you wrote because there is lots of powerful words.
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