Friday, November 1, 2013
The violent storm was
One cold miserable night I was curled up in bed trying hard to fall asleep but the violent storm was keeping me awake I just could not get to sleep. I started to get scared. I could hear trees falling. I woke mum up. She reassured me it was going to be okay. She gave me lots hugs. I fell asleep in Mum’s arms she put me in my bed, by that time the storm was over. Morning came. I pulled open my curtains to find that outside was a wreck. I knew that all day we would be cleaning. By Tia
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Wow what a great effort for your first 100 word challenge Tia. I like how you carefully selected words to create the atmosphere of fear "I fell asleep in mum's arms". What did you enjoy about doing the 100 word challenge?
ReplyDeleteHi Mrs Parkinson,
DeleteI am glad you liked my story it was a big challenge for the first challenge.The thing I enjoyed about this project was writing it and trying to do 100 words:) From Tia