One day a
farmer was going on a picnic with his family by a lake. They got their fishing
rods out and started fishing. Then suddenly the farmer felt a big bite. It was
so big that it pulled the farmer into the lake. His wife called the other
farmers to help them but nobody came and the farmer died. His son was crying. Since
that day the farmer’s ghost has been haunting the other famers because they
never helped him when he was drowning. His son got the boots out of the lake
and kept them to remember him.
Hello
ReplyDeleteWhat a sad story! I liked the idea of the farmer turning into a ghost. Maybe you could have described how they were fishing, for example, “They got their fishing rods out and flicked the lines into the water.”
Well done
Miss Willing - Team 100WC
Cambridgeshire, England
What a sad story! You have a really good idea here and have thought about the prompt carefully. I like how you tell the background to the story and then bring it to the present at the end. Well done.
ReplyDeleteThanks for your comment Mrs.prior we really liked it.
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From Enoka,Usman and Sam.
I like the story you have written.
DeleteI'm going to write a story like that.I like creepy storys
Luther Tangowahine School
OoOoOo I like your story! Its very creative. How did you come up with the idea?
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