Wednesday, March 19, 2014

Filipe's Swimming Experience

Everyone was getting ready to go into the pool. I had to get changed into my togs to get into the pool to swim. Then Miss Wyllie called the name out for the people to swim. Then it was my turn to go into the pool to do freestyle. When I just got into the pool, it was chilly. The water was enormous.
By Filipe, room15
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4 comments:

  1. Mrs ParkinsonMarch 22, 2014 at 4:39 PM

    Hi Filipe,
    I like the describing sentences like it was chilly. It makes your story interesting. Well done
    Mrs Parkinson

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  2. Mrs ParkinsonMarch 30, 2014 at 9:55 PM

    Hi Filipe
    Swimming sounds like fun. Was the water deep, or was it clear?

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  3. Powerful Learners in Room 7!July 2, 2014 at 1:01 PM

    Hi Room 15 i like you story about Filipes swimming experience

    from Masyn

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  4. Powerful Learners in Room 7!July 2, 2014 at 1:01 PM

    Hi Room 15 i like you story about Filipes swimming experience

    from Masyn

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