Wednesday, October 12, 2016
100WC Poppy
The material felt like a silky cloud. I couldn't wait for this to be sewn into a beautiful ballgown. I carefully feed the material to the machine. The material was so smooth it would tear at the slightest pull. Beautiful cream coloured ruffles fell out. I connected white satin ribbons to the dress. The silky material had created a dress with criss cross on the back with a low cut front. The ribbons hung from the sides like a waterfall. Silk touched my skin. I could feel the softness slide across me. Beautiful creamy silk material fell down my legs.
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A well written story.
ReplyDeleteYou used lots of adjectives to describe the dress.
Good punctuation.
Maybe try to use different describing words
other than silk.Well done!!!
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Amazing writing and dress! Mind-boggling description which we could all draw. Perhaps you could have used other word than material sometimes. Well done! :)
ReplyDeleteSuper description in here. I could really imagine what it felt like to wear the dress. You have used some interesting words: ruffles and waterfall. I really liked the simile at the start.
ReplyDeleteWell done.
A super piece of writing.
Mrs. Evans