By Poppy
P.S Post a comment with a personification sentence in it!
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Hi Poppy
ReplyDeleteGreat description about personification! You made it really easy to understand. Here is my sentence:
The car sat silently in the garage.
How did I do?
Mrs Paton
Hi Mrs Paton.
DeleteGreat sentence but i think it could be improved more. The house whispered secrets to the pansies, while the car hummed quietly in the garage preparing for it's journey.
How did I do?
Poppy